tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5626574667287070779.post5481238182114688387..comments2023-05-31T01:51:10.673-07:00Comments on Heaven in Hell: Sweet and Bitter Drinkshvninhellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02770366886087512711noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5626574667287070779.post-66430829483687193692010-06-26T18:24:26.027-07:002010-06-26T18:24:26.027-07:00This was great! I didn't have to wonder "...This was great! I didn't have to wonder "what is she really saying", which is a relief. Thank you for sharing this piece of writing. You have my vote!noexcuseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14149834972952594159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5626574667287070779.post-47091381875488148232010-06-26T06:34:56.062-07:002010-06-26T06:34:56.062-07:00Oops I meant to say a journal entry written with r...Oops I meant to say a journal entry written with rhythm. The lines above read that way to me.Unspokenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16065870952905767595noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5626574667287070779.post-23578273406128284852010-06-26T06:33:52.438-07:002010-06-26T06:33:52.438-07:00:)!! Hands down this is my very favorite piece you...:)!! Hands down this is my very favorite piece you have written. Whenever I read your relationship pieces I always wonder how much of you runs through the character. This one read almost like a journal entry.<br /><br /><br />I'm drunk on the left. I'm awake on the right.<br /><br />Seven numbers are hard to dial. I hate myself for that. I tell him that I love the shoes. I enjoyed our Merlot. But I need to make a new pot of coffee.Unspokenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16065870952905767595noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5626574667287070779.post-20308572323774527552010-06-26T03:50:45.013-07:002010-06-26T03:50:45.013-07:00nice, i like that closing line...you paint a very ...nice, i like that closing line...you paint a very strong woman character...who can make the hard choices...wish more were like that. nicely written...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5626574667287070779.post-73154571345027597082010-06-25T23:13:21.569-07:002010-06-25T23:13:21.569-07:00And that ladies and gentlemen is how it is done!! ...And that ladies and gentlemen is how it is done!! <br />Wow that lady has guts - maybe not trust but she has moxie <br /><br />Nicemoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5626574667287070779.post-65990999448920280512010-06-25T22:15:14.147-07:002010-06-25T22:15:14.147-07:00It's fictional with only a splash of personal....It's fictional with only a splash of personal. LOL! Sure it's as muddy as actually mixing coffee and merlot together and drinking it. And, the phone call for the character was as bad as it tasted.hvninhellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02770366886087512711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5626574667287070779.post-85969055324781165292010-06-25T21:44:12.909-07:002010-06-25T21:44:12.909-07:00I can feel the anguish of indecision, and then the...I can feel the anguish of indecision, and then the relief when the decision is made at last. It feels very personal.PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5626574667287070779.post-26995799628916325862010-06-25T19:52:35.585-07:002010-06-25T19:52:35.585-07:00So when's this phone call?So when's this phone call?JeffScapehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00190641629175438603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5626574667287070779.post-56380359528256879002010-06-25T16:45:27.705-07:002010-06-25T16:45:27.705-07:00Oh my, the pace of this is quite different from yo...Oh my, the pace of this is quite different from your last two entries and so heartfelt. Choosing to be alone is a mighty challenge, then staying in a loveless relationship is lonely in itself. I Really liked this bittersweet piece.Bainohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14156193098088048637noreply@blogger.com