The abyss is
so very dark
and deceptive
hiding death
beneath its
liquid surface
an accumulation of
all negative emotions
Reflectively alive and
waiting expectantly,
patiently
for the ones
who think
they are above
such things
the ones
who lived
using others' pain
as their
foundation
for their houses
of evil
even in the face
of the Reaper's
impartial grin
and beckoning
skeletal finger
hovering above
midnight stillness
of the infamous
lake of time
they deny it
evidence
bloody flesh,
ground up bones,
broken dreams
embedded in their feet
dripping from
outstretched hands
pleading their guilt,
their sociopathic
behavior away
Its hollow voice
reverberates
through their souls
indifferently asking
To Heaven
or to Hell?
Pray mortal
for what
made you think
you
could walk on water
could walk on water
on the way to eternity
frozen eyes reflect
the cool blue sky
a contrast to
their terror
rising as
they are
rising as
they are
sinking
below
into
mercury-like tar
below
into
mercury-like tar
oozes around
naked ankles
pulling them down
no time to drown
realization hits
too late
the first shot
the one that
damned them
to be one
with the shadows
was when
they took their
the first victim -
themselves
The metallic tones
of the Reaper
vibrates with their body's
violent shivers
It laughs
So, do you still think
you're above all these
emotions
Especially now
you're alone
with the karmic bullet
traveling toward you
in the dark?
you're alone
with the karmic bullet
traveling toward you
in the dark?
I liked this a lot. Loved the first stanza and the fifth especially.
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ReplyDeleteI like it a lot too, especially the last stanza. It sounds sort of like something Dirty Harry might say in the afterlife.
ReplyDeleteThank you! I love the visual of Dirty Harry w/ a scythe.
ReplyDeleteThis is pretty good. Not a huge fan of the final stanza, but it's pretty awesome overall.
ReplyDeleteI take it back... I like the final stanza, just don't care for it posed as a question.
ReplyDeleteHmm. . .? or ! or . interesting, would have to rephrase it a tad to take it out of the ? format. ..
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